Three Favorite Stories.

1. Pakou Lee -- Story in a Box

  • I enjoyed reading what happens to Emily on her vacation with her fiance. There are a lot of interesting spots going on in her story. It sort of reminds me of Robinson Crusoe.

  • The story logically flows. And corrects grammars are used. Good word choices.
 2. Qian Wang – Memory Coffee Shop

  • Swapping memory is a very good idea. People use their own memory swap other people’s memory. And there are some coincidences occurring in the story, which is what people like to see.
  • The dialogues in the story are fascinating. And the story logically flows.


3. Emily Schleif – Dream of events –Story in a Box

  • When I was reading Emily’s story, I was like watching a thriller. What happens to Hailey is thrilling.

  • Correct grammars are used.